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Very good!
I shall only point out two things that could be improved:
First, the voices: both acting are good, and I had not noticed the background noise, but at some times, especially during the "classroom" scene around 1:25, they were a bit difficult to hear and understand over the music.
Secondly, the bus's movements could have been better. around second 55, the fact that the wheels didn't move was pretty noticeable; and the motion was quite unnatural: mainly at second 55, but also the 1st time, the movement is too linear, and lacks the "forward-down" momentum-induced motion of the cabin as it weighs on the shock absorbers when the bus slows to a stop

watching it again, I also noticed a detail that I think should be mentioned: about 2:20, the lights coming through the bus window (which also appear to be the movie's icon) applies as if on a flat surface and not voluminous bodies.

apart from that, I found nothing worth notice that could have been made better, and can only say: congratulation for such an excellent work! the style you used for the backgrounds was in my opinion very well adapted for the animation you did, as was the music and were the voices of your characters. The "disappearing" motions in the end were pretty pleasant to watch, as was the whole of the animation, in fact. Once again, congratulations

Pahgawk responds:

Thanks! And yep, you picked up on my little bits of laziness. I accidentally drew the bus all on one layer, and being me, rather than going back to do the wheels separately I just left it as-is. Same with the shadow thing. Laziness on my part. Oops :P Glad you liked the video though!

good as far as I can judge, but why not use the music portal?

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