Poireau's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Yotam & Fantasia 10]

you know Fantasia's french doesn't mean anything at all, right? I couldn't even recognise all the words but it DID sound nice.
And as always, a very funny short :D

LazyMuffin responds:

im preeeeeeetty sure thats fluent french

[Exit credits]

not bad but you really should cut out the sound

thecalum666 responds:

It's supposed to sound static

[Stickman Can't Fight 6]

voices were a bit low =(
great nonetheless!

guitan11 responds:

next time the voice will be louder, promise :3

[Video Game Puns]

It's funny cuz it's stupid (also animation was not perfect)

TheGreeNate responds:

did you, look at the description.

[The Unknown Trailer]

looks cool, want to see more!
also, foud a typo: "an enemy who doesn't exist" doesn't take an S

Rival-X responds:

Thanks and sorry I am not so good in English ^^

[Solo (NATA)]

Very good!
I shall only point out two things that could be improved:
First, the voices: both acting are good, and I had not noticed the background noise, but at some times, especially during the "classroom" scene around 1:25, they were a bit difficult to hear and understand over the music.
Secondly, the bus's movements could have been better. around second 55, the fact that the wheels didn't move was pretty noticeable; and the motion was quite unnatural: mainly at second 55, but also the 1st time, the movement is too linear, and lacks the "forward-down" momentum-induced motion of the cabin as it weighs on the shock absorbers when the bus slows to a stop

watching it again, I also noticed a detail that I think should be mentioned: about 2:20, the lights coming through the bus window (which also appear to be the movie's icon) applies as if on a flat surface and not voluminous bodies.

apart from that, I found nothing worth notice that could have been made better, and can only say: congratulation for such an excellent work! the style you used for the backgrounds was in my opinion very well adapted for the animation you did, as was the music and were the voices of your characters. The "disappearing" motions in the end were pretty pleasant to watch, as was the whole of the animation, in fact. Once again, congratulations

Pahgawk responds:

Thanks! And yep, you picked up on my little bits of laziness. I accidentally drew the bus all on one layer, and being me, rather than going back to do the wheels separately I just left it as-is. Same with the shadow thing. Laziness on my part. Oops :P Glad you liked the video though!